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    Default 5 New beats - Feedback PLEASE!

    5 new beats I've been working on - as you can tell some aren't fully complete but those are the main sounds - please can you rate each one out of 10 thanks.
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    (remix of Trilla's 'who are ya?'
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    Which one is best/worst and why? I'd appreciate feedback greatly - thanks.

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    Bump...come on my threads get nothing.

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    1st one - nice idea but not really feeling it

    2nd - 9/10 , that synth bass sounds your using is a bit too raspy, and needs more low end and a better melody otherwise really good

    3rd - again nice idea but doesnt do it for me

    4th - 7/10 best melody so far and interesting synths, drums need more weight though and the mix isnt really balanced

    5th - 8/10 , like the terror danjah style melody but same as above

    i rate the really minimal style, but its actually quite hard to pull off and u did it well the number 2, also i think u could add some like vocal clips or effects and stuff to change it up a bit

    and learn some scales - https://www.pianoworld.com/fun/vpc/piano_chords.htm

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    thanks. As I say there not finished yet but I like the 2nd one best too.

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    Right, 9/10?!? WOW thanks - didn't think I was that good
    Will keep that one then
    Anymore feedback anyone? BUMP
    I haven't had time to respond apart from on my PSP - thanks mate.
    Here's some dubstep - how can I improve on it *pump the volume up*
    Thanks.

    Click here to watch the video on YouTube.

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    The 2nd is hard!

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    1st 5/10 i would add another sound or two to it, its kinda missing something

    2nd 7/10 need to adjust the volumes a bit

    3rd 4/10 its too simple needs some form of twist or drop that would grab the listeners attention

    4th 2/10 its just poor

    5th 3/10 it has potential but the drum pattern needs alot of work


    most of these beast are decent but there all missing something

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    Thanks again.
    I think the second tune is a definate keeper. I'm going to delete all the others as they're shit, tbh I made all of them a few months back and I've improved massively since then due to watching loads of tutorials.
    I'm going to polish the second one and put it up for free within the next month or so.
    Thanks.

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    1st one, improve the drum pattern , make them in time
    2nd one, you need to master the drums, but the idea is actully sick
    3rd one, I don't know what too make of it... but basicaally could you imagine an mc or singer over that?
    4th one, I don't know ur jus forcin something
    Edit: How long you been producin for?
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    The 4th and the 5th was good! Even if the 4th was "to funky" for my taste. And the 5th was a good mix, i think def the 5th was the best. Keep it up!

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    2nd is sick

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    Great feedback, I'm humbled.
    Like I say, I'm working on the second song and will put it up for free soon...I've added a little clap and some other stuff. Generally better though, and I may try completing them all after my exams.
    I produce dubstep and DnB though too, but will give my Grime stuff out for free. Also, I've had FL8/been producing for about 6 months, but haven't used it seriously until the past month or so as was just messing on it before that really.

    Again, thanks.

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