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    Grime Kid
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    Default Feedback needed for First Grime Song

    Hi All,

    We downloaded an instrumental from youtube and this is our first time making a song.


    Please could you check it out and give us feedback.


    Here it is:


    https://soundcloud.com/joshua-sander...4512/know-me-1

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    Last edited by _JS; 22nd September '17 at 11:36 AM.

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    Not Just Any Guy
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    The lyrics are pretty basic, but they'll naturally get better over time. The biggest problem is the timing and flow of your vocals is way off. At times there doesn't even seem to be a rhythm to them, its sounds like spoken word rather than rapping. Listen carefully to the instrumental and think about how you can make the rhythm of the vocals flow nicely with the beat.

    2nd guy's flow reminds me of president T lol

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    If is your first thank I can say that is very nice and keep going

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