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    Default Beat Feedback

    Like the 3rd beat I've attempted to make thoughts?
    @LJriddims @WarFace @Grimecraft



    Latest version.
    Last edited by Slips; 30th July '15 at 12:35 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Slips View Post


    Like the 3rd beat I've attempted to make thoughts?
    @LJriddims @WarFace @Grimecraft
    a bit messy, production wise you'd be better of getting at @LJriddims though.

    for a 3rd try not bad though



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    Quote Originally Posted by Slips View Post


    Like the 3rd beat I've attempted to make thoughts?
    @LJriddims @WarFace @Grimecraft
    llooool what did you do


    had to check i didnt have other tabs open and logic wasnt still running ffs
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    Quote Originally Posted by WarFace View Post
    a bit messy, production wise you'd be better of getting at @LJriddims though.

    for a 3rd try not bad though
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    llooool what did you do


    had to check i didnt have other tabs open and logic wasnt still running ffs
    Did i break the internetz ??

    On a levz though, check this one out, it's much better than the last one, I made it tonight


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    yh thats a lot better, keep it simple lol @Slips
    do some other little melodic variations n add some other drum sounds for a bit m8
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    Quote Originally Posted by Slips View Post
    Did i break the internetz ??

    On a levz though, check this one out, it's much better than the last one, I made it tonight

    is nice, give me the stems ill make it sommat nice for ye then vocal it if you want



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    Quote Originally Posted by Madiba View Post
    yh thats a lot better, keep it simple lol @Slips
    do some other little melodic variations n add some other drum sounds for a bit m8


    That any better? I know the Violin was well repeated I'm learning though.

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    i dunno what you changed tbh lol

    hats never need to be so high up in the mix btw
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    Quote Originally Posted by Madiba View Post
    i dunno what you changed tbh lol

    hats never need to be so high up in the mix btw
    I tried changing up the violin sound, but I fucked it up on one pattern so I changed that a little now, It's not in that upload though, Edit: I get you, like I hadn't altered the mixing on it, Im with you, just upping a new version. Appreciate the help with this, I really liked making this one, so anything I can do to improve it is worth it.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Slips View Post
    I tried changing up the violin sound, but I fucked it up on one pattern so I changed that a little now, It's not in that upload though, How do you mean btw? like sound wise or ?
    they're a bit too loud + the second deeper hat sound is just pure shit lol
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    Quote Originally Posted by Madiba View Post
    they're a bit too loud + the second deeper hat sound is just pure shit lol
    Yeah i got you, I wasn't using my headphones so couldn't really tell shit,

    I think that's the best I can do with my limited skills

    the last set of hats sounds shit so I'll fix that tbh.
    Last edited by Slips; 29th July '15 at 11:37 PM.

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    have you got like a repeater on that or something
    why do you have no control over what sounds come out

    just write that shit in midi m8
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    @Madiba Nah I was doing it in piano roll, and moved it down so it didn't sound repetitive, but for some reason I'm a cunt and didn't listen that far in after I changed it, apart from that shit, hows it sounding? it sounds a bit better and less repetitive apart from the hat I fucked up, I don't use the like click in things, because It's just a pain in the arse.

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    lots of unnecessary repetition in most phrases

    try using a pizzicato sound as a counter-melody?

    u using fl? @Slips
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    Quote Originally Posted by Madiba View Post
    lots of unnecessary repetition in most phrases

    try using a pizzicato sound as a counter-melody?

    u using fl? @Slips
    Yes I am fam, with Nexus the sound ain't actually a violin I forgot, It's called Dark Cello,

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    this song transports me back to when i used to go to bowsers castle stepping on ducks n stuff to save the princess
    brb

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    Quote Originally Posted by 316 View Post
    this song transports me back to when i used to go to bowsers castle stepping on ducks n stuff to save the princess
    am so glad i av touched you in a non saville way, i hope u beat him !

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    I like it. It is a bit repetitive, certainly feels like it goes on for longer than it needs to tho. Don't ask me how to fix repetitiveness? I'm learning how to do that myself lol. I can see the track being part of a larger mix though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Slips View Post
    am so glad i av touched you in a non saville way, i hope u beat him !
    nah fuck that tbh i been busy on my adventure tryna find zelda n turn her into tetra n wake up like link tbh
    brb

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    I thought the beat was out of beat at first but its a grower. I just think the timing of it needs evening up a bit. Would be a bit awkward to spit on, but its got that grimey sound

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