Deepz - New grime beat, feedback?

[deeps]

New grime beat im working on, any thoughts?


http://soundcloud.com/djdeepa001/track00010

[BR92]

sounds decent

i would add some more sounds to the drum pattern for every 16/32 so it doesn't sound too repetitive.

[deeps]

sounds decent

i would add some more sounds to the drum pattern for every 16/32 so it doesn't sound too repetitive.

Cool, thanks for the feedback. I'll have a play around with the drum pattern and add some variations. Might also play around with the bass pattern in certain parts.

Any more thoughts?

[FLOYDCHEUNG]

yeah vocals on this would be bangin

[deeps]

yeah vocals on this would be bangin

Nice one mate, maybe I'll see if i can get some vocals once its finished.

[NSF]

Sound pretty sick, the whole thing just needs pushing a bit level wise as everything sounds a bit soft. Like the bass synth seems to be overpowering everything so nothing else seems like its hitting hard enough.

[deeps]

Sound pretty sick, the whole thing just needs pushing a bit level wise as everything sounds a bit soft. Like the bass synth seems to be overpowering everything so nothing else seems like its hitting hard enough.

Cheers mate, thanks for the comments. I've had a play around with the levels, changed the drum pattern and added a different bass synth for variation. Hopefully that makes it hit harder. Let me know what you think.

[deeps]

Anymore thoughts?

[Feral]

the fucks that rattle sound on the snare? sounds like rattlesnake or someshit. I like that, compliments that durty bass nicely. Yeah only thing that needs work is a more interesting drum pattern or a switchup on the patterns like someone said! good work G

[deeps]

the fucks that rattle sound on the snare? sounds like rattlesnake or someshit. I like that, compliments that durty bass nicely. Yeah only thing that needs work is a more interesting drum pattern or a switchup on the patterns like someone said! good work G

Thanks for the comments. Its a sample I had, don't know what it is though. It sounds like one of them flag type rattles that you spin around.

I've uploaded my final version now, added a breakdown in the middle and switched up the drums/layout in parts.

I've exported all my instruments as MP3 loops and thought it would be good to upload them, see if anyone wanted to mess around with them? They are all 320 quality and the zip file is only 12mb. Got the bass, synths and stings, no drums though. Let me know if anyone has a go at this, would be good to hear what other people come up with.

http://rapidshare.com/files/41350881...0010_Files.zip

http://www.mediafire.com/?2uhuyhinf4q36sx

[RiddlezPro]

bass sounds deep

[deeps]

bass sounds deep

Nice one, thanks for the feedback.

[Rukkas]

the fucks that rattle sound on the snare? sounds like rattlesnake or someshit. I like that, compliments that durty bass nicely.

Yeh man aint talking shit,that really does comliment the bass,well,the tune allover really...

[FilthyBeatz]

Sounding nice fam!!

[-NoX-]

This was good had a dark vibe to it which I liked. I think the bass was overkill but lowering it would help. You should definitely get some vocals on it if you can. If you can't get an artist just find an acapella that suits the beat.

[deeps]

Yeh man aint talking shit,that really does comliment the bass,well,the tune allover really...

Nice one, i've used the sample on other tracks and quite a few of people have said it sits well with this one.

Sounding nice fam!!

Thanks for the feedback.

This was good had a dark vibe to it which I liked. I think the bass was overkill but lowering it would help. You should definitely get some vocals on it if you can. If you can't get an artist just find an acapella that suits the beat.

Thanks for the feedback. I haven't got anyone to vocal the track, if anyone wants to have a go let me know and i can send a good quality version. Or send me an acapella.