Need some feedback and help

[Deset]

Never made a proper garagey sounding beat before so had a go and remixed one of my newer grime beats, but it sounds dead and have no idea what to add (happens alot)


http://www.divshare.com/download/10667914-06b


Ignore the dead buildup/intro. Ive got that sorted but cant upload it just yet.

[Christophe Dugarry]

not sure it sounds garagey

i don't think it's dead though lol
i actually rate that tune, had me skankin'

[BR92]

it sounds fine the way it is

if you want to add something try some dark synth's/low pitch sounds

[Christophe Dugarry]

it sounds fine the way it is

if you want to add something try some dark synth's/low pitch sounds

for garage? nahh

[Wiz]

I like the ideas. Drop it on Soundcloud so we can hear the real clarity.

[Valhalla]

i like the beat, it has elements of garage but i don't really thing i would class it as that