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    Default (US GRIME) Quick UFO Freestyle I just made.. let me know if you like any of it.


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    Click here to watch the video on YouTube.

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    *opens thread*
    *ascertains that MC has neither knife or gun*
    *goes shop for supermalt*
    If it quacks like a whore, and waddles like a whore... #Duck o_O

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    Quote Originally Posted by BizzyDot View Post
    *opens thread*
    *ascertains that MC has neither knife or gun*
    *goes shop for supermalt*
    nope no gun or knife here.

    here is another quick free I just made to a beat that was posted on these forums

    Click here to watch the video on YouTube.
    Last edited by DeeM; 26th April '12 at 10:06 PM.
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    yanks on grime <<<<<<<<<<<<<
    Slew Dem Mafia

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    Quote Originally Posted by DAT PIFF View Post
    yanks on grime <<<<<<<<<<<<<
    ah come on try to ignore the accent.. i love grime music and wanna get better this is the first vid i ever made.
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    I have a problem with Yanks on grime too - you guys just 'dont get' the flow

    things like the 1 line flow and power of ad lib = totally lost on wunna

    all pars aside tho, best of luck - listen to more Esco and Trim
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    ah fair enough.. any tips? Im not gonna give up I love flowing and love grime music
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    Big up the US grime fans.
    No power of genius has ever yet had the smallest success in explaining existence. The perfect enigma remains...

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    Quote Originally Posted by The Enigma View Post
    Big up the US grime fans.
    safe man appreciate that.

    edit: @BizzyDot will do
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    Quote Originally Posted by BizzyDot View Post
    I have a problem with Yanks on grime too - you guys just 'dont get' the flow

    things like the 1 line flow and power of ad lib = totally lost on wunna

    all pars aside tho, best of luck - listen to more Esco and Trim
    I never understood that, it seems like it's laid out there plain and simple.

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    The delivery isn't tight. And due to the accent I find myself constantly comparing with Tre Mission.

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    Practice, research, strive for originality, make sure u keep the 'gas levels' high enough

    (can't stress importance of these tips enough fam)
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    Quote Originally Posted by Wiz View Post
    The delivery isn't tight. And due to the accent I find myself constantly comparing with Tre Mission.
    Understandable.. thanks for the comment

    Quote Originally Posted by BizzyDot View Post
    Practice, research, strive for originality, make sure u keep the 'gas levels' high enough

    (can't stress importance of these tips enough fam)
    thanks fam. im gonna work on something tonight I will post back here when I am done.
    Last edited by DeeM; 26th April '12 at 10:30 PM.
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    Quote Originally Posted by DeeM View Post
    ah fair enough.. any tips? Im not gonna give up I love flowing and love grime music
    thats the spirit fam
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    took time to listen, cud of been worse its the flow more then the accent for me. yanks dnt seem to get it

    but keep doin wat ur doin , hope to see u improve
    You lost a bet remember.

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    Quote Originally Posted by bcfczu1 View Post
    took time to listen, cud of been worse its the flow more then the accent for me. yanks dnt seem to get it

    but keep doin wat ur doin , hope to see u improve
    appreciate it. I definitely could of taken more time with it I just wanted to throw something quick together to see what ya'll think.. basically if I have any chance of improvement.. thanks though safe.
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    your good man, i love hearing americans on grime, try make your flow a bit more skippy/quick

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    Quote Originally Posted by DeeM View Post
    appreciate it. I definitely could of taken more time with it I just wanted to throw something quick together to see what ya'll think.. basically if I have any chance of improvement.. thanks though safe.
    ye man keep goin, dont listen to some people on here, all they like is proven mcs
    You lost a bet remember.

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    maybe use more words in your bars

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    I've seen more established, more domestic mc's get murdered just tryna get feedback ere fam

    so ur not doing bad (at least in GF terms), just keep the same spirit and u'll do fine tbh!

    *could you post some MC's that inspire you/ some US Grime artists you know of*
    Last edited by BizzyDot; 26th April '12 at 10:55 PM. Reason: suttin i forgot
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