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    Hey guys, finished this last week and I'm after some constructive criticism. I started making beats just over a year ago and this is my first finished grime instrumental. Still think the arrangement could use work as well as the bass melody in some parts.

    Let me know what ya think, safe!



    http://soundcloud.com/wotzit/n64-rough-mix

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    This is sick, it's seriously weird.

    Not too keen on the bass sound but I suppose that's just personal.

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    Nice one.

    What's up with it? Too aggressive, too inharmonic?

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    Quote Originally Posted by WOTZiT View Post
    Nice one.

    What's up with it? Too aggressive, too inharmonic?
    Maybe just a bit too wild or something, it's kinda all over the place. You should make a dip around 200-400 Hz btw, sounding a bit muddy.

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    yeah the inharmonic stuff is a put off

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