Old Grime tune mash up please take a listen

[PlatnumDJ]

Whats going on every1 got Fruity Loops couple of days ago and thought id try making a little mash up id appriciate if you could check it out & let me no what u think its nowhere near finished so dont hold back on the critism if its weak just say it straight out. just want opinions on weather its worth finishing or not safe. Platnum

http://rapidshare.com/files/13123343...ished.mp3.html

[safeblud12345]

Link don't work.

[PlatnumDJ]

hold up bro ill get you a next one

[Pristine Condition]

zshare it, it will be easier for people to give you feedback

[PlatnumDJ]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/1568057817be8af4/

here you go like i said though it aint finished so any tips or anything would be goood still only started trying to produce couple of days ago so bless if you check it out.

[J Beatz]

wtf is this why post up your first beat for feedback u should post up material later down the line like 6 months or a year or sutin

[PlatnumDJ]

true true i never said it was good though just wanted feedback on if it was a good start since iv only started producing couple of days ago init