My part of a new tune. Constructive criticism pls :)

[Piehitman]

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[Breathe Beats]

i like it, unique flow, maybe put abit more power behind your bars.

where you from bruv?

sound like a midlands accent

[Piehitman]

i like it, unique flow, maybe put abit more power behind your bars.

where you from bruv?

sound like a midlands accent

cheers and yeah yeah i'll do that for my next tune.

I'm from south-east London, you?

And I might upload some of my older tunes in a bit. :D

[Breathe Beats]

cheers and yeah yeah i'll do that for my next tune.

I'm from south-east London, you?

And I might upload some of my older tunes in a bit. :D

ah i could of sworn that your accent was out of london

im from nottingham bruv

welcome to the forum :bandgun:

[Piehitman]

ah i could of sworn that your accent was out of london

im from nottingham bruv

welcome to the forum :bandgun:

Yeah it might sound out of London-ish but the chorus sounds like a London accent to me anyway.

I grew up with a lot of American Hip Hop influences (tupac, biggie, eminem, etc) and I started spitting as a joke before I even heard of grime. This was back in around 2000/2001 its only recently I have got into hardcore grime and i'm trying to sound more grimey :)

BTW, the beat you posted up is sick man, if you ever want to give out a few beats I'm always here to vocal. :D

and thanks :)

[Breathe Beats]

Yeah it might sound out of London-ish but the chorus sounds like a London accent to me anyway.

I grew up with a lot of American Hip Hop influences (tupac, biggie, eminem, etc) and I started spitting as a joke before I even heard of grime. This was back in around 2000/2001 its only recently I have got into hardcore grime and i'm trying to sound more grimey :)

BTW, the beat you posted up is sick man, if you ever want to give out a few beats I'm always here to vocal. :D

and thanks :)

safe bro

yeah i grew up with the american influence aswell, when i got older aload of my mates got into garage and mcing so yeah you can imagine the way it went from there lol

have anything you want off my space bruv, all up for download.

Bless

[Flawz]

Yeah you sound like an out of londoner :)

Anyways, your flow is very original, with some work it will sound BIG! I like how you sound, interesting voice, keep it up; as someone already said, with more confidence behind your bars you'll sound 100x better :)

[Piehitman]

Yeah you sound like an out of londoner :)

Anyways, your flow is very original, with some work it will sound BIG! I like how you sound, interesting voice, keep it up; as someone already said, with more confidence behind your bars you'll sound 100x better :)

sweet man!

i'm amazed by the good comments i'm having and yeah i'll be working harder on being more confident and i'll see how things go :D

[Jason P]

For the record:

Flawz = gyal! <3

[Mister Lacey]

I'd just say add more passion and character when you spit and work on flow a lot more, it's not bad at all though man.
But yeah try stand out with delivery.
Big up though man.