I Got bored so I knocked this out like 15 minutes ago..lol

[Mister Lacey]

Old beat but a sick one so fuck it.

3672154-851

[Demos]

:alot:
:wheel:

[Lemon]

:wheel:
It's alot!!
:bandgun:

It's TOO much. Where's Hij, he'll smash something up when he hears it.

[Mister Lacey]

Lol

[I Can See You]

L-Man rebore?

[Anonymous]

Thats Big.

[Anonymous]

L-Man rebore?

Never That.

[Mister Lacey]

L-Man rebore?

:whatdid::yawn:

[Lemon]

L-Man rebore?

:dunce:
lol. Freestyles sick

[Breathe Beats]

:wheel:

[Mister Lacey]

LOL Safe people.
I swear I just need to practice and get better though.
Keep working on my bars and flows.

[Lemon]

lol. Hij will mash up his PC when it gets to the forum bars

[Breathe Beats]

"at the end of the day i'm just being me
and if you dont like that go fuck yourself"

lmfao

:wheel:

[Mister Lacey]

I tweaked it abit 2 mins ago and re upped it so hopefully it doesn't sound as bad quality wise.

[Lemon]

lol, i'll listen again then
:2guns:

[Hij]

L-Man rebore?
LMAO.

Are you seriously saying that or can you not tell the difference between peoples voices?

"at the end of the day i'm just being me
and if you dont like that go fuck yourself"

lmfao

:wheel:
LOOL its big. I was feeling it for sure! :D

But I still think feedback is needed, not that I think I could do better but if you wanna progress and that- all of the info I write after this... is after I think its a good tune... so bear that in mind.

No need to mention what went on with your family at the end it ruins the vibe, people feel bad at the end, just cut it out its not needed. On a real actually, while im on the Whisky and the subject and not holding back, you don't need to mention that stuff in your profile either, I appreciate what you've been through but your big without anyone even knowing what went on- and random guys may feel alienated... no send at all though honest man you know I think your doing it and if you wanna leave it there, thats you innit.
Could have been spat a bit faster (first few verses were sick- honestly we're talking 8/10 here) but then it felt a bit slow for that riddim towards the end (download the durrty goodz riddim slew to wiley to see what I mean and how fast he goes) but the bars were on point so well done- very big.
Big up the Grimeforum big ups its always appreciated bruv and theres a beer for you when you hit the UK again :DThis is straight up and down honesty man you dont get this on no other forum

Oh also

I like the parody of the Old Wiley tune.INFACT fuck it, ive listened back and your speed is ok for the first 32(ish), but it feels like it slows down a bit towards the end which loses the hype a little bit, that beat needs to be absolutely fucked up to be merked... which is why it was a good beat to pick coz u had to bring your best to the table.

Great effort mate.

Feel free to do a few more.

[Lemon]

lol @ every point being labeled 1.
:drinks:

[Mister Lacey]

LMAO.

Are you seriously saying that or can you not tell the difference between peoples voices?

LOOL its big. I was feeling it for sure! :D

But I still think feedback is needed, not that I think I could do better but if you wanna progress and that- all of the info I write after this... is after I think its a good tune... so bear that in mind.

No need to mention what went on with your family at the end it ruins the vibe, people feel bad at the end, just cut it out its not needed. On a real actually, while im on the Whisky and the subject and not holding back, you don't need to mention that stuff in your profile either, I appreciate what you've been through but your big without anyone even knowing what went on- and random guys may feel alienated... no send at all though honest man you know I think your doing it and if you wanna leave it there, thats you innit.
Could have been spat a bit faster (first few verses were sick- honestly we're talking 8/10 here) but then it felt a bit slow for that riddim towards the end (download the durrty goodz riddim slew to wiley to see what I mean and how fast he goes) but the bars were on point so well done- very big.
Big up the Grimeforum big ups its always appreciated bruv and theres a beer for you when you hit the UK again :DThis is straight up and down honesty man you dont get this on no other forum

Oh also

I like the parody of the Old Wiley tune.INFACT fuck it, ive listened back and your speed is ok for the first 32(ish), but it feels like it slows down a bit towards the end which loses the hype a little bit, that beat needs to be absolutely fucked up to be merked... which is why it was a good beat to pick coz u had to bring your best to the table.

Great effort mate.

Feel free to do a few more.


LOL I took the depressing ending out now. And yeah some girl was meant to help me write a new bio a more pro one but she aint done it =/ par. True say though some heads message me and say big up I relate to ur story which is heavy. But it is too much info for a Myspace bio. Ummm yeah it did slow down a bit flow wise at the end next time I'll speed it up for ya lol but I don't think I can spit as fast as Goodz yet I'm still working on my flows and shit lol one day!!! Deffo not my best to the table though!!! And I'll always big up the forums mate!

Safe for the constructive feedback!

[BOSS CAT]

LOL I took the depressing ending out now. And yeah some girl was meant to help me write a new bio a more pro one but she aint done it =/ par. True say though some heads message me and say big up I relate to ur story which is heavy. But it is too much info for a Myspace bio. Ummm yeah it did slow down a bit flow wise at the end next time I'll speed it up for ya lol but I don't think I can spit as fast as Goodz yet I'm still working on my flows and shit lol one day!!! Deffo not my best to the table though!!! And I'll always big up the forums mate!

Safe for the constructive feedback!

Yes mate
I think you've got potential...keep being yourself..thats the key.
Didnt hear the original ending, but yeah I agree, positive and up-tempo content is def the best angle most of the time...however not enough mc's in grime/any style have the steez to talk about real life issues that they may have experienced...you know the deal hide behind masks tryna be on the bad man tip. These days showing emotions on a track can be a big point of difference for an artist.

Yep bit of a skippy flow is needed also. lol .

Long ting anyway with my rant!

Basically its large for a quick throw up on the net cuz.

[Mister Lacey]

Appreciated man!

Yeah man in all honesty it was just something quick innit.
I'll come with something better next time!

[Jason P]

Go Lacey! Go Lacey! Go Lacey! Go Lacey! Go Lacey! Go Lacey! Go Lacey!

Brrrrrraaaaaapa!

[Randy]

you seem to have a personality in your spitting which very few grime artists seem to have.

[Molecules]

SHOWER...i can definitely hear the influences you listed on the other thread, like the 'grime forums' fade-out, you don't hear enough fade-outs in this kind of music :D

[abass]

this is alot lol u remind me of rinser tho cuz u buss bare joke lol

[Breathe Beats]

lol @ every point being labeled 1.
:drinks:

lmfaooooo

[Lemon]

Tunes alot, had to give it another listen today.

I agree with Boss Cat. Keep being yourself.
Dunno why people are ok with leng and shank talk, but some deep real talk gets to them.

Pissed!! Tune fades out berrr early now. lol.

[Miyagi Dan]

big up lacey its a big freestyle

[Mister Lacey]

Safe people...Feedback is much appreciated!

[RIP Jakey]

been looking forward to this and its big man. i agree with hij on his feedback but the flow and speed will come with practise and becoming a better writer so its down to hard work geeza, keep grindin!

[Mister Lacey]

I'll work on it tonight and turn it into a proper dub.
Safe people!

[SHANK BUTCHER]

how come you took it off your myspace?

[Flawz]

Very nice, I like this..Biggup Lacey :)

[Mister Lacey]

how come you took it off your myspace?

LOL I'd just like to work on my EP and not put out too much before then even if it is a freestyle thing, just so people don't get too familiar with my style before the EP drops. I might re up the Igloo thing recorded a bit better as a last thing before the EP. I don't know.
But seriously thanks everyone for the feedback.
Much appreciated!

[Lemon]

EP should be good, be interesting to see what the finished thing will be like

[SHANK BUTCHER]

lol yeah cuz i've bin listening to it today and when i gotta listen to it on here i've gotta open another window to browse the forum while listening to it as apposed to having it up on your myspace, so all in all my feedback is 'SAFE AS FUCK' lol cuz it's bin in my top five listens for today. havn't heard of you before coming on here but most likely gonna cop the cd cuz i like the real sound that you've got. big up lacey to be top 20 mc :P

[Mister Lacey]

lol yeah cuz i've bin listening to it today and when i gotta listen to it on here i've gotta open another window to browse the forum while listening to it as apposed to having it up on your myspace, so all in all my feedback is 'SAFE AS FUCK' lol cuz it's bin in my top five listens for today. havn't heard of you before coming on here but most likely gonna cop the cd cuz i like the real sound that you've got. big up lacey to be top 20 mc :P

Wicked, safe man that's heavy!
Yeah man I'm just gonna work on the EP make it good and keep at it.
Big up!

[Mister Lacey]

EP should be good, be interesting to see what the finished thing will be like

:hey:

[Mister Lacey]

LOL I put an edited version back on Myspace but that's it until I drop this EP. I got to put all my work into that.
Big up everyone!
Theres bare heads on here involved so big up the Frisbee massive!

[TRU_G]

you seem to have a personality in your spitting which very few grime artists seem to have.

Yer this is what sets you apart from alot of MC's

You obviously got a vision and the work ethic so I am expecting big things

[KingSizeBlues]

It's Alot Lacey.
You put alot of energy and personality into your tracks wich ALOT of MC's lack, it's a good look.
Big.

[Jason P]

MAssive frisbee thing!

[Wiz]

lol, you sound like a white version of Marga Man (no send)

song sounds good though

[ALM]

Lacey I'm going to try and hook you up with some decent beats give me a couple of weeks.

[feasible_weasel]

shower :itsalot:

[Pred]

lol, you sound like a white version of Marga Man I know what you mean there in the first few bars!

I didn't hear the original version with the extra lyrics at the end, but I think a general rule is to keep the mood the same throughout, so by the sound of things they didn't fit...but practice makes perfect eh! I think the only way you can effectively change the mood in a song is when you do a Switching songs...but even then it doesn't really work that well!

TBH it's the first time I've heard you, and I like your style. Someone said about skippy...but why be like the other 20,000 MCs trying to be skippy?