So solid style/garage/grime beat = Success

[Grime Star]

well dat's wat i fink so herez my try of it:Beat 009 (clip)
www.myspace.com/manouver1
plz tell me wat u fink. and it aint finnished so any constructive criticism would be good

thanks

[Breathe Beats]

badman beat

its alot

[Grime Star]

badman beat

its alot

safe 4 dat

n e improvements needed???

[Breathe Beats]

safe 4 dat

n e improvements needed???

maybe switch it up abit

have a stronger melody

[Grime Star]

k

n e mre feedback

[Top Lad]

Its a lot boss.

[Grime Star]

Its a lot boss.

safee

[Jason P]

The two melodies sound off-key. Could be big though.

[Grime Star]

k il try see n i need 2 fix up da melody asell bt safe

[Grime Star]

** B U M P **

[Mister Lacey]

I swear lol I've been waiting for the player to load for 15 minutes lol

[Grime Star]

lol has it loaded yet

[Mister Lacey]

nah man lol

[Grime Star]

:par: lol some1 needs 2 upgrde 4rm windows 93
jokin:D

[Mister Lacey]

Lol Lol Lol

[Mister Lacey]

It's good man in all honesty I'd just change the piano into a next sound.

[Grime Star]

klkl safe il experiment wit different sounds

[Pred]

Yeah, I don't think the piano works. Other than that, nice beat mate.

[Grime Star]

Yeah, I don't think the piano works. Other than that, nice beat mate.

k, safe

[Ohhhkay]

dass basic fruity kicks i swer

[Grime Star]

yh it is stuff lyk dat im styl gna chnge dnt wrry

[Jason P]

Was gonna talk more about the beat, but player doesn't load XML shit!