Rate/Hate this..

[Piehitman]

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[charma]

where in london are you from out of curiosity ?

[EllaDecember]

u sound a bit like voltage especially at the beginning.

[Piehitman]

where in london are you from out of curiosity ?

Bromley

and has anyone got any tips + feedback whether they like it or not?

[The Messiah]

I like the beat. There's bit when your spitting bars where it sounds like there is a puppy yelping/some sort of higher pitched hicuppy sort of sound. At first I thought it was a sound effect, but is it you ad-libbing or something? What ever it is, i think the track would be better without it.

[Blank]

Is your voice breaking by any chance? No sendage
Just plainly asking

[Piehitman]

I like the beat. There's bit when your spitting bars where it sounds like there is a puppy yelping/some sort of higher pitched hicuppy sort of sound. At first I thought it was a sound effect, but is it you ad-libbing or something? What ever it is, i think the track would be better without it.

yeah it usually happens when i switch from like a 4 bar rhyme to a different rhyme. Can't explain how I do it as my voice has fully broken lol but i'll work on it in the future (Y)

Anymore feedback/tips?

[Piehitman]

also..what do you guys think of the tune overall? i've improved greatly over the last year and would like to know how i'm doin.