*please listen to my new beat*

[charma]

safe guys, a clip of a new beat im working on. the one i entered for the competition didn't get very good responses so please can i have some feeback for this.

sorta intro/verse/chorus structure so listen to the end...

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fanks...

[adidasgrandad]

i like it. the drops nice. possibly a few too many sounds bout 52 seconds in. like the sounds that come in dont suit it. the beat would be better without them. good still

[critic of musical arts]

its alright

[Anonymous]

Not really feeling it. Dont think anything really fits.

[charma]

fair enough, thanks for taking the time to listen.

adidas cheers for the feedback, ill have a play around n see what i can do.

[Nine Bar]

i do like the melody and the skank

chorus wud b better if u tok them cheap sounds out and more bass imo

but its a standard beat nufin special but not shit...keep at it son

[charma]

general reaction is the chorus needs changing then...

cheers cortz, i wasn't sure of it myself but my own opinion aint the one that matters get me.