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casual
23rd March '08, 08:51 PM
Writing an article for the college newspaper about..
and need to give an example of how clever lyricists in grime can be..
need to giv a positive image of grime..
( My mind has gone blank...completely)

so jus need couple bars or one liners that are just deeply metaphorical and good rhyming and stuff..

any suggestions please...

safe

'nuum general
23rd March '08, 08:53 PM
i just leng a man down
hop out the whip and just leng a man down

seriously

try dimples - grime's dead, or something

G.K.
23rd March '08, 08:53 PM
Jme. The seat belt bars on understand. just a quick one off the top of my head. But ya some Jme bars or something.

Grime Star
23rd March '08, 08:54 PM
Ill bang your father outtt

casual
23rd March '08, 08:55 PM
Not violent bars lool

lyk jus lyrically deep and stuff.. no leng talk please lol

Grime Star
23rd March '08, 08:55 PM
"THE YOUNG ONES ARE WORST THAN THE OLDERS ARE
THEY'll BURST JUST TO QUOTE AND LAUGH" Ghetto

mcgrime
23rd March '08, 08:56 PM
grimestarr + webstar = fools
how are those clever lyrics giving a positive image to grime

you must be brothers or summit

casual
23rd March '08, 08:56 PM
Jme. The seat belt bars on understand. just a quick one off the top of my head. But ya some Jme bars or something.

yh leme chk it safe

Grime Star
23rd March '08, 08:58 PM
grimestarr + webstar = fools
how are those clever lyrics giving a positive image to grime

you must be brothers or summit

r u tryin 2 tell me discara isnt a gr8 lyricist

'nuum general
23rd March '08, 08:59 PM
grimestarr + webstar = fools
how are those clever lyrics giving a positive image to grime

you must be brothers or summit

you are yet to grasp the concept of sarcasm i take it

mcgrime
23rd March '08, 09:01 PM
you are yet to grasp the concept of sarcasm i take it

concept of sarcasm is hard to understand with written words.....all i know is he wanted help and you gave him sum air bars

samur41
23rd March '08, 09:01 PM
goodz - give me the music

mcgrime
23rd March '08, 09:02 PM
r u tryin 2 tell me discara isnt a gr8 lyricist

i'll bang your father out


SKEEN.

casual
23rd March '08, 09:09 PM
goodz - give me the music

oh yh forgot bout that.
safe 4 dat.

Grime Star
23rd March '08, 09:11 PM
Ghetto-how it is
wiley- doorway

Quality Control
23rd March '08, 09:14 PM
concept of sarcasm is hard to understand with written words.....all i know is he wanted help and you gave him sum air bars

FUCK YOU

Quality Control
23rd March '08, 09:14 PM
oh yh forgot bout that.
safe 4 dat.

it's a plagiarised concept

Retrofreak
23rd March '08, 09:19 PM
Black Da Ripper:
"U Know Me, Im Not M-O-P, But I Cn Make The Crowd Ante Up
Im Like A Disease, So If U Have Me, On ur Mp3,. Your A Carrier"

Durrty Goodz:
"I've been tryina pull myself together,I've been out here puzzled,cause this shit got me torn apart
you where like my brother from a different mother, we were taking ova like Napolean but [Born-Apart]


Wretch 32:
"Ima Ahead Of That, Im Snow-cold, Heavy Rap
My disc will be in every car, im like yearly tax"

"I Got A Way With Words Like A theasaurus"

casual
23rd March '08, 09:22 PM
Black Da Ripper:
"U Know Me, Im Not M-O-P, But I Cn Make The Crowd Ante Up
Im Like A Disease, So If U Have Me, On ur Mp3,. Your A Carrier"

Durrty Goodz:
"I've been tryina pull myself together,I've been out here puzzled,cause this shit got me torn apart
you where like my brother from a different mother, we were taking ova like Napolean but [Born-Apart]


Wretch 32:
"Ima Ahead Of That, Im Snow-cold, Heavy Rap
My disc will be in every car, im like yearly tax"

"I Got A Way With Words Like A theasaurus"

safee for that..
the goodz and wretch bar is goin straight in.

Retrofreak
23rd March '08, 09:23 PM
it's a plagiarised concept

Everythings been done before

Quality Control
23rd March '08, 09:33 PM
Everythings been done before

but that was a blatant rip-off and i don't even mind that, because Doogz aint the only one to do their own version of I Used To Love H.E.R. but it's annoying when people go on like he's some kind of genius for coming up with the concept

Common's version is infinitely better

Retrofreak
23rd March '08, 09:41 PM
but that was a blatant rip-off and i don't even mind that, because Doogz aint the only one to do their own version of I Used To Love H.E.R. but it's annoying when people go on like he's some kind of genius for coming up with the concept

Common's version is infinitely better

Bare people have done metaphor's like that even Bob Marley.
If anything I give Goodz props for telling his story and spitting it "double time"

Quality Control
23rd March '08, 09:43 PM
Bare people have done metaphor's like that even Bob Marley.
If anything I give Goodz props for telling his story and spitting it "double time"

i think Jimi Hendrix did it originally

and Common tells the story way better than Doogz

Retrofreak
23rd March '08, 09:50 PM
i think Jimi Hendrix did it originally

and Common tells the story way better than Doogz

That's your opinion that's fine,

But Commons talking about Hip Hop

Goodz is talking about his relationship with music in general from in the womb to Grime moving too fast in the club.

Similar ,but different.

If your calling Goodz unoriginal you might aswel point the finger at 99% of the grime scene ,because everything has been done before.

R-Style
23rd March '08, 11:24 PM
i was born 2 blaze, dot rotten pass the lighter, watch me spark this mic up

GrimmyGrimGrim
23rd March '08, 11:37 PM
if i SEE you in my ends, that's GBH

artificer
23rd March '08, 11:40 PM
If your calling Goodz unoriginal you might aswel point the finger at 99% of the grime scene ,because everything has been done before.

Scenes definitely been lackin originality for a long while, especially whn it comes to mcs.

artificer
23rd March '08, 11:41 PM
"Im a hot guy, give me air ill give you carbon dioxide."
Row.D Beats

Quality Control
24th March '08, 01:25 AM
That's your opinion that's fine,

But Commons talking about Hip Hop

Goodz is talking about his relationship with music in general from in the womb to Grime moving too fast in the club.

Similar ,but different.

If your calling Goodz unoriginal you might aswel point the finger at 99% of the grime scene ,because everything has been done before.

99% of music full stop is unoriginal nowadays. and i didn't think Gimme the Music was particularly well executed, weakest song on Axiom easily

Common as an artist transcends genre boundaries, Doogz is good but is incomparable to Common in my eyes

Heckz
24th March '08, 03:33 AM
listen to z.o or wretch 32

smart bars.. dun kno

Jae Dave
24th March '08, 04:13 AM
common is a legend man...

MedellinManDem
24th March '08, 04:35 AM
Most of J2K's stuff is clever.
Then you gotta go to guys like Wretch, Scorch, Ghetts, Devs...

Retrofreak
24th March '08, 07:53 AM
99% of music full stop is unoriginal nowadays. and i didn't think Gimme the Music was particularly well executed, weakest song on Axiom easily

Common as an artist transcends genre boundaries, Doogz is good but is incomparable to Common in my eyes

I've been following Common since "Resurrection" his a sick lyricist ,but gets very, very boring.

I liked his bars with "De la soul" on "The Stakes is high album and The Bitch in you"

"Gimme the music" is sick end off.... and not the weakest track on Axiom imo.

As I said.. I give Goodz credit for spitting something so deep "double time"..it's a lot easier to rap that in a normal flow on a slow hip hop beat.

Jay05
24th March '08, 10:24 AM
"Im a hot guy, give me air ill give you carbon dioxide."
Row.D Beats

lol

Alfie
24th March '08, 02:36 PM
"Its metaphor time. I ain't having none this ain't sister act"
"The only time I've never had game is when I sent the 360 back"
"I'll make the strap blow. Start the Aggro and clap you back free yard"
Vortex (Westwood Freestyle)

"Lemme kill 2 birds with the seed, don't need to throw stones. I just breath"
J2K (Same Freestyle As Vortex)

"And its Tayyyyyyy"
You all know who

"I hate it when I listen to swag MC's ruining Britain"
Devlin - Actual Artist

"I represent the homeless, let down by a nation thats more interested in war and invasion"
"She counts 15 needles on the way to the lift. And this is where Blair said it's safe to live and raise kids?"
"A old man, killed by society. Strangled quietly."
Devlin - Community Outcast

I got extra.

Grime Star
24th March '08, 02:53 PM
i never listen 2 vortex bt wiv bars lyk dat i myt start. wats his myspace

Alfie
24th March '08, 03:04 PM
http://www.myspace.com/texonline

Grime Star
24th March '08, 03:07 PM
safe

Alfie
24th March '08, 03:07 PM
Seems a bit hip-hopish on there.

Grime Star
24th March '08, 03:11 PM
Hez Hiphop?

edit ohh k ddnt see dat

Alfie
24th March '08, 03:13 PM
Nah nah he's grime. New tunes seem kinda hip-hop.

Grime Star
24th March '08, 03:14 PM
k

casual
24th March '08, 03:15 PM
"Its metaphor time. I ain't having none this ain't sister act"
"The only time I've never had game is when I sent the 360 back"
"I'll make the strap blow. Start the Aggro and clap you back free yard"
Vortex (Westwood Freestyle)

"Lemme kill 2 birds with the seed, don't need to throw stones. I just breath"
J2K (Same Freestyle As Vortex)

"And its Tayyyyyyy"
You all know who

"I hate it when I listen to swag MC's ruining Britain"
Devlin - Actual Artist

"I represent the homeless, let down by a nation thats more interested in war and invasion"
"She counts 15 needles on the way to the lift. And this is where Blair said it's safe to live and raise kids?"
"A old man, killed by society. Strangled quietly."
Devlin - Community Outcast

I got extra.


Oh my dayz..
dat bar is crazily fucked.
safe for them all still.

Alfie
24th March '08, 03:18 PM
Lol it's cool.

Tony Starks
24th March '08, 03:28 PM
I know a guy called charlie......

Ghetts Acoustic Freestyle
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4w0_5VYHR4w

Alfie
24th March '08, 03:42 PM
I remember that acoustic set back in the day.
"Runnin' up in the carphone warehouse and screaming don't move"
YouTube Wheeeeeel!

Llelo
24th March '08, 03:51 PM
Wretch

"I move colours on blocks like Rubix cubes"

"I made my wrist sweat til it froze"

"I think out the box when I circle through
And lick out a box of that purple food
I got my Green Lane like the Turkish crew"

Scorcher

"Got a ring on the left hand
I'm married to the game, so you could say cling is the best man"

Little Dee

When I'm off the pitch and back in the streets I've still got a football mind
5-a-side rules - don't shoot in my area
If a penalties given out then the whole of your team gets fined.

Trim

"I'm not a set of stairs - nobody's running up on me"

"I pulled the Ace out the pack and replaced it with a Joker
Call it Deja Vu, Rinse and Corona
Portion of chips of my shoulder"

Castro

"I got knowledge -I did my work in class
Went college, and I moved work in class
Got money, but I'm still working class
I sat next to one Turk in class
He was always on about B - he showed me how to work it fast
Helped man flip my first key"

Carter
24th March '08, 03:52 PM
Black Da Ripper:
"U Know Me, Im Not M-O-P, But I Cn Make The Crowd Ante Up
Im Like A Disease, So If U Have Me, On ur Mp3,. Your A Carrier"

Durrty Goodz:
"I've been tryina pull myself together,I've been out here puzzled,cause this shit got me torn apart
you where like my brother from a different mother, we were taking ova like Napolean but [Born-Apart]


Wretch 32:
"Ima Ahead Of That, Im Snow-cold, Heavy Rap
My disc will be in every car, im like yearly tax"

"I Got A Way With Words Like A theasaurus"

so bait The Movement bang out the theasaurus when making tracks lol

mcgrime
24th March '08, 11:43 PM
FUCK YOU

A and B Conversation

So C Yourself Out Retard

Suck Your Mom On Your Way

Quality Control
25th March '08, 01:12 AM
A and B Conversation

So C Yourself Out Retard

that was genius *starts to slow clap*

GDotRiz
26th March '08, 10:19 PM
i knw u wont use these coz their mine n i aint known but.....


rudeboy,im bouncing back on the scene like a boomerang,
coming back at ur chats,on tracks cos G dots da man,
its an ongoing thing,heads always chatting bout merking,
aint making no mistakes,jus merking fakes wivout even shooting,

spit from da tongue,thats next 2 the gums u act like a fucking plum,
aint saying suck mums,do the sums ur gna lose me plus u i won,
u got no hope of beating me,like ur a boxer wiv no hands prick,
u couldnt pack a punch line,even if u wrote ur lyriks in da mitt,

chatting bout punchlines,il punch every mc thats spitting a line
after the exclamation mark,full stop,end of paragraph ur outlined,
that was harsh il admit,but in my mitt ur a big tit i aint feeling,
wot ur drop is a flop,ur bait take this rod n line n start reeling,

cos this style i got,is developing quiker than a kodak foto can,
so im gona have 2,leave u seeing stars like the paparazzi man,
i mean ur coming wiv a style,thats even drier than farm yard straw
where as mine is pure quality like colombian coke fresh off da sea shore

G.K.
26th March '08, 11:10 PM
I know a guy called charlie......

Ghetts Acoustic Freestyle
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4w0_5VYHR4w

Ghetts should rap over acoustics more often because I could actually understand him! He didn't get hyped!