W.A.R Martial ryder freestyle

[W.A.R Martial]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JEynVkKH7KI

[Dan-91]

JEynVkKH7KI

Fixed.

[W.A.R Martial]

JEynVkKH7KI

Fixed.

safe mate couldnt embed it gave up lol...

[Dan-91]

It's cool, just rep me, you know the deal :P

[TheBayveMan]

Horrible, you didnt deserve to ride that beat still.

(awaits Carters slew)

[Randy]

not the best. not by a long way and in all fairness you are probably not going to make it anywhere as an MC. sorry. you write a decent bar tho, could try doing just that? krays line was good.

[cRiminal]

if you want my honest opinion take these steps to better yourself:

1.Place the mic in ur hand

2.Take the mic lead and wrap it securely round your neck

3.Attach it to something that will definately hold your body weight (this ensures you wont survive)

4. Stand on a bucket then jump off

[W.A.R Martial]

not the best. not by a long way and in all fairness you are probably not going to make it anywhere as an MC. sorry. you write a decent bar tho, could try doing just that? krays line was good.

i like the way u added probably! just look out for the chronicle's of W.A.R LP comin soon......

i believe i have groundbreaking music for the uk to hear so we'll see innit!

the ryder thing was just a random freestyle which i honestly think is decent!!! and im old enough to not be biased so dont try twisting it...

but yea safe anyway......

[slim]

if you want my honest opinion take these steps to better yourself:

1.Place the mic in ur hand

2.Take the mic lead and wrap it securely round your neck

3.Attach it to something that will definately hold your body weight (this ensures you wont survive)

4. Stand on a bucket then jump off

I lool'd simply bcuz seein numbas i expected proppa advice 4 u

and yh W.A.R keep it Goin, if ur motivated enuff to make an L.P continue doin ur thing

['nuum general]

I like your style, has an old skool feel.

[JayStarz]

its alright

accent is kinda annoying

[Randy]

i like the way u added probably! just look out for the chronicle's of W.A.R LP comin soon......

i believe i have groundbreaking music for the uk to hear so we'll see innit!

the ryder thing was just a random freestyle which i honestly think is decent!!! and im old enough to not be biased so dont try twisting it...

but yea safe anyway......

well you've built it up now so you better not let us down...

[DEEPAMAN101]

its ok all i can say

tracks could could come out very good
but i duno

[Zink18]

thout hes got bare potential stilll.....

like the anger......large bars man

[Curphey]

I rated it, flow is sick.

[Exo]

It's alright, I liked that biggy tune you spat on.

But I don't think your style of MC'in is very current for grime, bit oldschool sounding.

[W.A.R Martial]

safe for da feedback man.......

my album is dun, i have sum decent music ready to hit da uk jus waitin n bidin my time!!!

organisin a release how it should be dun! all i need is 1 opurtunity an im der.....

[cRiminal]

safe for da feedback man.......

my album is dun, i have sum decent music ready to hit da uk jus waitin n bidin my time!!!

organisin a release how it should be dun! all i need is 1 opurtunity an im der.....

Your album isn't even worthy to be a frisbee

[W.A.R Martial]

Your album isn't even worthy to be a frisbee

u dnt no nothin so fuck off with ur negativity u mug.......

[FlashG]

biggup war martial

[Randy]

safe for da feedback man.......

my album is dun, i have sum decent music ready to hit da uk jus waitin n bidin my time!!!

organisin a release how it should be dun! all i need is 1 opurtunity an im der.....

gotta be pro-active. put youself about and that. few free releases, sets on pirates or tunes with bigger boys.

no-one is just going to walk up to you with a record deal when there are more talented people putting the work in, with bigger fan bases and back catalogues

[W.A.R Martial]

gotta be pro-active. put youself about and that. few free releases, sets on pirates or tunes with bigger boys.

no-one is just going to walk up to you with a record deal when there are more talented people putting the work in, with bigger fan bases and back catalogues

safe fam, why cant every1 jus be like u, an give critisism in a constructive manner.....

no need to hype an be dikeads jus give opinions....

[natzta]

do your thing man, just remember not all things are to peoples tastes, 100+ views and couple comments, big up the silent listeners, done

[Carter]

Oi Paul, don't try it son!

You're in your thirties and still trying to come up in a scene dominated by teenagers.........Your 'life' is a joke mate! Man is on a joke ting with this Carter ting but still what does it say when my name has been mentioned on legal and pirate radio more than you.........you must see its a waste of time paul

[W.A.R Martial]

Oi Paul, don't try it son!

You're in your thirties and still trying to come up in a scene dominated by teenagers.........Your 'life' is a joke mate! Man is on a joke ting with this Carter ting but still what does it say when my name has been mentioned on legal and pirate radio more than you.........you must see its a waste of time paul

carter ur a dikead mate, im 27 got no shame in sayin how old i am......

i make music cos i can, an cos i enjoy it aint gotta answer to u!

dnt post in my topics unless its related to the topic.....

[Jay]

Your 27 and making topics bitching about having a thread moved? wow.