Never Again

[Grimace]

tell me what you think fam

http://www.zshare.net/audio/509397884cd20534/

anybody want to vocal it let me know

[Sheff.Steel]

Its alright. More bass more bass more bass.

[milkshke1]

i like the triangles

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safe

any more?

[G.P]

Melody's are conflicting badly, there almost drowning each other out in parts.

Has got the potential to be good once you sort out the structure issue.

[Grimace]

i admit the vibrato makes it sound a little busy

all the notes are in chords and in key tho

could maybe work on thw mix abit

safe for thr feed

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+

[Bluntwun]

i like the triangles


Its alright. More bass more bass more bass.


For real this tunes nice... one word id use to describe it: MELANCHOLY..

could imagine a lot of mcs on this, with their deep bars about personal struggles and life on road .. deep drums would sit well on this i reckon too

[Quite a character]

^^^ single-handedly dissuaded me from listening

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Thanks for not listening. It means alot.

[Bluntwun]

^^^ single-handedly dissuaded me from listening

my bad :lips: it is actualy a good beat

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safe

[Leng Man Louie]

it's alright man levels seem abit high though maybe it's my earphones

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my monitors aint all that so I appreciate feed on the mix

[Wiz]

Nar man, not feeling it. Too many random layers.

[Grimace]

fair enough

they're not random though

if i switched the violin vibrato to a piano you would see they are all chords

[G.K.]

Beats alot IMO. Something I'd love to hear a vocal on.

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Beats alot IMO. Something I'd love to hear a vocal on.

safe fam